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Amelia Lake's avatar

"Outside the world is born anew"

Idk why but I literally have goosebumps.

Aaron J. Govan's avatar

I was far from imagining that my words could evoke that kind of sensation :) Thanks a lot for your feedback, Amelia!

Maya Sarin's avatar

Lovely read on a Sunday morning!

Aaron J. Govan's avatar

I’m glad you like it, Maya :)

Ral Joseph's avatar

The sweetest springtime Aaron 🌸

Run lots of poems and stories about spring. But this one completely beats all of them. it's very existential and transcending and your words are weaved perfectly together. I'm now you be your biggest fan truly.

Aaron J. Govan's avatar

Oh man… Reading your comment about my poem just made my day, thank you so much, dear friend!

VedicSoul - By~ A Bhardwaj's avatar

Bright and sunny poem... Great way to start the day...

Thank you it's beautiful ❤️

Aaron J. Govan's avatar

Many thanks for your feedback!

John Mitchell's avatar

Beautiful poem and wonderful to have the French

Aaron J. Govan's avatar

I'm glad you like it, John, and even more so since you appreciate the French version as well! :)